my first draft

title:Tim and friends
settings: home,park,restaurant
character:tim,jessie,rachel
story:
one day there is a girl named jessie waiting for her friends at home.Finally they arrived they were tired so they take a break.they were planning to go to the park so they did .when they arrived Jessie was playing a slide, rachel was playing a rocking horse and tim was just siting watching the girls.they were so hungry so they went to the restaurant and order some food. jessie ordered a fried chicken , rachel ordered a French fries ,tim ordred a fried chicken too.after that they went to the park again .At the park tim was now playing the slide ,rachel was playing the rocking horse and jessie was seating reading a book.After that they went home cause they were thirsty. they take a rest for a while and take a nap. after they woke up they went to the restaurant to get more food.after they went to the restaurant they eat at the park.After they eat they were playing tag.Then they were planning to have a picnic the next day.So the next day rachel , tim and jessie went ot the park together.They were having a pudding,a cake,juice and a coffee.They all enjoyed it. After the picnic they feel like they want to play so they play slide together ."It was the funnest day ever"the all said'.They were tired so they went to take a rest at the park.when they were resiting tim's mom came.They were so surprise that tim's mom came.Tim ask his mom "why are you here?".tim's mom said "to check if your alright".tim said "okay".so they all went home to there own house .THE END

five reasons why i like making a blog.

1.you can play anything in your own blog.
2.you can put pets in your blog.
3.you can post your name in your blog.
4.you can even add games in your blog.
5.you can put music in your blog.